Research essay examples with REAL grader feedback

[multilingual_phd]

desperate for good research essay examples... got C- and comments like "lacks depth". anybody willing to share papers with actual feedback?

 

[Wendy_89]

Here's what earned me consistent A grades. Research essay on climate policy implementation:
Feedback: "Excellent integration of quantitative data with policy analysis"
DM if you want to see full paper with comments.

 

[multilingual_phd]

bruh who even gets As?? my best research essay got B- with "decent analysis but citation formatting is a mess" like sorry for not being perfect at 3am

 

[writeORdie]

In 15 years of grading research essays, strongest examples share key traits:
Clear methodology
Original insights
Current sources
Proper formatting

 

[Reacce80]

y'all talking about methodology while i cant even figure out how to start... last essay feedback was "introduction reads like wikipedia"

 

[library_ghost]

ugh feel u... my first research essay was about genetic engineering but prof said it read like sci-fi. now getting As after learning proper academic tone

 

[lab_rat_pro]

Want to see an actual disaster? My first grad school research essay came back bleeding red: "This is undergraduate level work at best." Now published in journals. Growth is real.

 

[myAlgorithm3r5t]

marking essays rn actually. best ones don't just info dump - they critique sources and develop original arguments

 

[broke_but_studying]

@lab_rat_pro how did u go from bad feedback to publishing?? teach me ur ways sensei

 

[theoryBuff]

adjusts reading glasses Back in my day, we had to physically visit archives for research. These kids with their digital databases don't know how good they have it.

 

[westernblot]

ok boomer but like... digital research >>> dusty books. just got A+ on my research essay using latest studies that aren't even in print yet

 

[Wendy_89]

Reading these comments... interesting mix of old and new approaches. Both have merit. My most recent publication combined archival research with big data analysis.

 

[lab_rat_pro]

@Wendy_89 could you share your outline structure? my research essays keep getting "lacks coherent organization" comments

 

[Wendy_89]

check DMs! sent you my outline template and prof's feedback. warning: they're brutally honest

 

[lab_rat_pro]

honestly... sometimes feedback feels personal. got "perhaps consider creative writing instead?" on my research essay. now published author in both academic AND creative fields. take THAT, prof wilson

 

[SamStudent24]

@lab_rat_pro that's actually super inspiring my profs keep saying my writing is "too creative" too... maybe i should stop seeing it as a weakness? still trying to find that sweet spot between engaging and academic tone tho. any specific tips that helped you balance both styles??

 

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